pecsonpecs: (UNWANTED INTROSPECTION)
KRIEG!!! ([personal profile] pecsonpecs) wrote in [community profile] doku 2016-03-21 04:45 am (UTC)

[Come on, Nariko, you're not helping. Actually, on second thought, she's not really not-helping either. The dialogue is fine but unless she's saying them with braided nylon in her hands, it's not going to make him any harder.]

My life? Why is it my life? Am I the damsel in distress that can only be rescued by your magical twat?

[Huh.

He's starting to sound a little 'in stage character' there.
]

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