gunslingerqueen: (Otherwise appraisal)
Nariko Lunae ([personal profile] gunslingerqueen) wrote in [community profile] doku 2016-04-20 11:40 pm (UTC)

Okay. [Constructive criticism is important and, in all fairness, they usually just have normal sex so she is a little out of practice here. While it does sting a little to know she didn't get it right the first time Nariko takes a deep breathe, exhales out that negativity, and smiles.]

Can I try again?

[If he's totally lost the desire for it she'll understand, but everyone loves a comeback story, right?]

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